"The brute covers himself, the rich man and the fop adorn themselves, the elegant man dresses!"
-Honore de Balzac
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andreyb
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Mon Sep 26, 2016 5:33 pm
Here is the lyrics:
Des passants taillés sur mesure
Défilent devant des vitrines
Ou les mannequins en devanture
Porte haut la couleur du spleen
Rien ne dépasse, pas un fil
Un geste ni un mot de trop
Les corps se déplacent avec style
Sur les trottoirs de Savile row
Comme toujours il pleut sur Londres
L'hiver ici semble sans fin
Mais sous le ciel qui s'effondre
Les dandys marchent l air serein
De Shaftsburry avenue
Au marché de Portobelo
Ils gardent le cap, la tenue
Vers les trottoirs de Savile row
Les visages sont parés
(L usage l'exige)
D'un masque grave et glacé
...Élégance oblige
Brummell, Byron, Gary Cooper
Et d'autres sont passés par là
Le regard noir, l'air supérieur
Dans leurs costumes, coupez droit
Voyez passer ces gentlemen
Avec leur trench-coat sur le dos
Qui sous la bruine se pavanent
Sur les trottoirs de Savile row
Comme un linceul sur les pierres
La brume envahissant la rue
Habille de sa robe légère
Ce monde bientôt révolu
Ou des vieux Lords sophistiqués
Qui continuent de porter beau
Avant d'aller prendre le thé
Vont faire un tour à Savile-row
Les visages sont parés
(L usage l'exige!)
D'un masque grave et glacé...
Élégance oblige
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hectorm
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Mon Sep 26, 2016 7:34 pm
Thank you for posting it, andreyb
Here´s my (crude) English take:
Gentlemen donning bespoke
promenade by the windows
where mannequins in display
proudly carry the colors of melancholy
Nothing out of place, not even a stitch
Not a gesture, not a word
The bodies go by in style
on the sidewalks of Savile Row
As it´s always raining in London
winter here has no end
But under the collapsing skies
unflappable dandies go by
from Shaftsburry avenue
to the Portobelo market
on the sidewalks of Savile Row
Their faces are shielded
(custom demands it)
with a severe and icy mask
...elegance requires it
Brummell, Byron, Gary Cooper
and others have passed on by.
Obscure gaze, air of superiority
dressed in their well tailored garments
See these gentlemen strolling
with their trenchcoats on their shoulders
sauntering under the mist
on the sidewalks of Savile Row
Like a shroud over the cobblestones
the mist invades the street
dressed in its supple cloth.
In this world soon to be over
old sophisticated Lords
still beautifully dressed
before meeting for tea
take a stroll by Savile Row
Their faces are shielded
(custom demands it)
with a severe and icy mask
...elegance requires it
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Mon Sep 26, 2016 8:36 pm
andreyb wrote:And I suspect this is RJMan's wrongdoings!
Andrey
Not I...
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andreyb
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Wed Sep 28, 2016 12:26 pm
Hectorm, thank you for the very nice translation!
Now I see that the song does indeed "carry the colors of melancholy"...
Andrey
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Wed Sep 28, 2016 8:40 pm
andreyb wrote: Now I see that the song does indeed "carry the colors of melancholy"...
Since my first magical encounter with Baudelaire´s work many years ago, I have always struggled translating "
le spleen". If forced to do it, first think of
"ennui" in French that gives me the feeling, and then I use what better serves in context.
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